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The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph illustrates how individuals spend money on various entertainment sources namely cinema, video, music, publishing, and television between the year 1995 and 2000 in three countries Asia, Europe, and Unites States. Firstly, in asia the most preferred source of enjoyment were television and publishing comprising of three fourth of money spent followed by music. Whereas, the least amount was spent on video and cinema. However, the trend remained the same in the year 2000 but the amount of money spent increased to 110. Similarly, Europe showed similar statistics spending 97 in the year 1995 and 131 in 2000. United States had the highest number of humans spending on entertainment mostly on television and publishing thereafter on music and least preferred forms was again cinema. The maximum money spent was 257 in the year 2000 by people of United Stats while the lowest was in the year 1995 in Asia. Overall, in all the countries during five year span the highest rated form of entertainment was television and publishing with almost same preference. On the other hand, cinema was the lowest rated source of entertainment on which people spent money.
The bar graph illustrates how individuals spend
money
on various entertainment sources
namely
cinema
, video, music,
publishing
, and
television
between the
year
1995 and 2000 in three countries Asia, Europe, and Unites States.

Firstly
, in
asia
the most preferred source of enjoyment were
television
and
publishing
comprising of
three fourth of
money
spent
followed by music. Whereas, the least amount was
spent
on video and
cinema
.
However
, the trend remained the same in the
year
2000
but
the amount of
money
spent
increased to 110.

Similarly
, Europe
showed
similar statistics spending 97 in the
year
1995 and 131 in 2000. United States had the highest number of humans spending on entertainment
mostly
on
television
and
publishing
thereafter on music and least preferred forms was again
cinema
. The maximum
money
spent
was 257 in the
year
2000 by
people
of United Stats while the lowest was in the
year
1995 in Asia.

Overall
, in all the countries during five
year
span
the highest rated form of entertainment was
television
and
publishing
with almost same preference.
On the other hand
,
cinema
was the lowest rated source of entertainment on which
people
spent
money
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.

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