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The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram demonstrates the connection between numerous idioms. Overall, it is clear that English is the base for many other languages. Moreover, the majority of languages that are derived from english belong to the British English Branch. Evidently, location plays a role in which language will be spoken as different sights have their own language. The picture illustrates that English is mainly divided between American English Branch and British English Branch. North American countries have the American English Branch, while countries that were colonized by England have significant influence from the British English Branch, such as Australia, New Zealand and Ireland. Furthermore, it is evident each location has its own adaptation of language. For example, while Canadians speak the FrancophoNe Canada and Anglophone Canada, Britishes Isles speak Iris English and Welsh Scotish. Additionally, there is a total of Y number of languages that come from British English Branch such as Indian Pakistan, Far East and Australisia. It also occurs with the American English Branch, however on a smaller scale as x different languages are created.
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connection between
numerous idioms.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that English is the base for
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many
other
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languages
.
Moreover
, the majority of
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languages
that
are derived
from
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english
belong to the British English
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Branch
.
Evidently
, location plays a role in which
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language
will
be spoken
as
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different
sights have their
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own
language.

The picture illustrates that English is
mainly
divided between American English
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Branch
and British English
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Branch
. North American countries have the American English
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Branch
, while countries that
were colonized
by England have significant influence from the British English
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Branch
, such as Australia, New Zealand and Ireland.

Furthermore
, it is evident each location has its
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own
adaptation of
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language
.
For example
, while Canadians speak the
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FrancophoNe
Canada and Anglophone Canada,
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Britishes
Isles speak Iris English and Welsh
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Scotish
.

Additionally
, there is a total of Y number of
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languages
that
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come
from British English
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Branch
such as Indian Pakistan, Far East and
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Australisia
. It
also
occurs with the American English
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Branch
,
however
on a smaller scale as x
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different
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languages
are created
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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