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The graph shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

THE LINE CHARTS GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE AMOUNT OF POPULATION IN INDIA AND CINA FROM 2000 TO THE PRESENT DAY, AND IT FORECASTS TRENDS TIP UNTIL 2050. THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE LIVING IN INDIA AND CHINA HAS INCREASED STEADILY OVER THE LAST 20 YEARS. AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CENTURY THE INDIAN POPULATION WAS AROUND 1 BILLION, NOWADAYS INDIA COUNTS MORE THEN 1. 3 BILLION OF CITIZENS. WHEREAS, CHINA IN 2000 RECORDED A POPULATION OF 1. 25 BILLION AND NOW IT HAS MORE THAN 1. 4 BILLION. OVERALL, CHINA HAS BEEN MORE POPULOUS THEN INDIA OVER THE LAST TWO DECADES. HOWEVER FIGURES ARE EXPECTED TO CHANGE IN 2030, WHEN INDIAN POPULATION WILL OVERTAKE CHINESE POPULATION. ACCORDING TO THE GRAPH, THE AMOUNT OF PEOPLE IN INDIA WILL RISE SHARPLY, REACHING A PEAK OF ALMOST 1. 6 BILLION IN 2050. IN CONTRAST, CHINESE POPULATION WILL DROP SLIGHTLY TO 1. 4 BILLIONS BY THE HALF OF THE CENTURY. THEREFORE IN 2050 INDIA IS PREDICTED TO HAVE A POPULATION N OF O. 5 BILLION HIGHER THEN CHINA.
THE LINE CHARTS GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE AMOUNT OF
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POPULATION
IN INDIA AND
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CINA
FROM 2000 TO THE PRESENT DAY, AND IT FORECASTS TRENDS TIP UNTIL 2050.

THE NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
LIVING IN INDIA AND CHINA HAS INCREASED
STEADILY
OVER THE LAST 20 YEARS. AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CENTURY THE INDIAN
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POPULATION
WAS AROUND 1
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BILLION
, NOWADAYS INDIA COUNTS MORE
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THEN
1. 3
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BILLION
OF CITIZENS. WHEREAS, CHINA IN 2000 RECORDED A
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POPULATION
OF 1. 25
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BILLION
AND
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NOW
IT HAS MORE THAN 1. 4 BILLION.

OVERALL
, CHINA HAS BEEN MORE POPULOUS
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THEN
INDIA OVER THE LAST TWO DECADES.
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HOWEVER
FIGURES ARE
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EXPECTED
TO
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CHANGE
IN 2030, WHEN INDIAN
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POPULATION
WILL OVERTAKE CHINESE
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POPULATION
. ACCORDING TO THE GRAPH, THE AMOUNT OF
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PEOPLE
IN INDIA WILL RISE
SHARPLY
, REACHING A PEAK OF ALMOST 1. 6
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BILLION
IN 2050.
IN CONTRAST
, CHINESE
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POPULATION
WILL DROP
SLIGHTLY
TO 1. 4
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BILLIONS
BY THE HALF OF THE CENTURY.
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THEREFORE
IN 2050 INDIA
IS PREDICTED
TO HAVE A
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POPULATION
N OF O. 5
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BILLION
Did you mean “HIGHER than”?
HIGHER THEN
CHINA.
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IELTS academic The graph shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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