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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. gkXl
The line chart demonstrates how many tones of waste did three companies produce between 2000 and 2015. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the biggest difference in the final result in 2015 is between company C which accounted for the highest amount of waste (over 9 tones), and company B, which showed the lowest figure (3 tones). Company A started with the highest waste production, but finally, is situated in the middle. According to the graph proportion of waste in company A was constantly decreasing from 12 to 9 tones in 2000 and 2015 respectively. In comparison company C did the total opposite. The total number of waste started from approximately 5 tones in 200 and went up till it reached almost two times more in 2015. Company C's waste production rose from almost 9 tones to reach its peak in 2005 to 10 tones, then it dramatically slumped and accounted for 3 tones in 2015. We can see from the chart the declining tendency of producing waste in most companies.
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C did the total opposite. The total number of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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