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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. d252
THE BELOW GRAPH ILLUSTRATES HOW MUCH AMOUNT OF WASTE IS PRODUCED MY THREE COMPANIES, OVER A TIME PERIOD OF 15 YEARS BETWEEN 2000 AND 2015. UNITS ARE MEASURED IN TONNES. OVERALL, COMPANY A PRODUCED MORE WASTE AT BEGINNING, WHERE COMPANY C PRODUCED LESS WASTE AT STARTING ARE RAISEDD RAPIDLY. FIRSTLY IN YEAR 2000, COMPANY A STOOD IN TOP POSITION BY PRODUSING 12 TONNES OF WASTE. FROM 2005 IT DECREASED RAPIDLY TO 8 TONNES BY 2015. SECONDLY, COMPANY B PRODUCED 8 TONNES OF WASTE AND SUDDENLY IT ROSE TO 10 TONNES IN YEAR 2005. HOWEVER, THERE WAS A DRAMETIC FALL TO 3 TONNES IN THE YEAR 2015 AND IT WAS THE ONLY COMAPNY WHICH PRODUCED LESS THAN 5 TONNES AFTER 2014. MOREOVER, COMPANY C PRODUCED 4 TONNES OF WASTAGE AT THE BEGINNING OF 2000, BUT THERE WAS A RAPID GROWTH IN BETWEEN 2010 TO 2015. LIKEWISE, COMPANY C MET BOTH COMPANIES B AND C IN THE YEAR 2010 AND IN BETWEEN 2010 TO 2014.
THE BELOW GRAPH ILLUSTRATES HOW MUCH AMOUNT OF
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WASTE
IS
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PRODUCED
MY THREE
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COMPANIES
, OVER A TIME PERIOD OF 15 YEARS BETWEEN 2000 AND 2015. UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN TONNES.

OVERALL
,
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COMPANY
A
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PRODUCED
MORE
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WASTE
AT BEGINNING, WHERE
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COMPANY
C
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PRODUCED
LESS
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WASTE
AT STARTING ARE
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RAISEDD
RAPIDLY
.

FIRSTLY
IN
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YEAR
2000,
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COMPANY
A STOOD IN TOP POSITION BY
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PRODUSING
12 TONNES OF
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WASTE
. FROM 2005 IT DECREASED
RAPIDLY
TO 8 TONNES BY 2015.

SECONDLY
,
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COMPANY
B
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PRODUCED
8 TONNES OF
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WASTE
AND
SUDDENLY
IT ROSE TO 10 TONNES IN
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YEAR
2005.
HOWEVER
, THERE WAS A
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DRAMETIC
FALL TO 3 TONNES IN THE
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YEAR
2015 AND IT WAS THE
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ONLY
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COMAPNY
WHICH
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PRODUCED
LESS THAN 5 TONNES AFTER 2014.

MOREOVER
,
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COMPANY
C
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PRODUCED
4 TONNES OF WASTAGE AT THE BEGINNING OF 2000,
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BUT
THERE WAS A RAPID GROWTH IN
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BETWEEN 2010 TO 2015
.
LIKEWISE
,
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COMPANY
C MET BOTH
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COMPANIES
B AND C IN THE
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YEAR
2010 AND IN
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BETWEEN 2010 TO 2014
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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5.5
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