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The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the uk from 1974 to 2002.

The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the uk from 1974 to 2002. J2jB
The line graph depict the information about four types of modes to exported in England during 28 years of time period. It is clearly seen that the different type of modes such as road, water rail and pipeline were used for transport goods in United State. The quantity of goods represented in million of tonnes. Firstly, pipeline was using 5 million tonnes of material transport in the beginning year 2002. It was reached at 21 million tonnes. The export through rail line in the start from 40 tonnes and it was fluctuate during 1978 to 1994 after that this was reached on 41 million tonnes in last year. Further more, the transportation via water in the initial year 1974 to 1978 was just 40 million. whereas after 4 year it follows updward trend and reached at 69 million tonnes of goods transport. Then the growth of water transport way was stable untill 1998. In, 2002 it reached 62 million. Finally, the transfer things by road vehicles was start on 65 million tonnes in the year 1974 and in the last 2002 it was reaching at the peek point 99million tonnes. Overall, the highest amount of goods was exported by road. However pipeline was the least commonly used mode of transport over the entire period.
The line graph depict the information about four types of modes to exported in England during 28 years of time period.

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in United State. The quantity of
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represented in
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million
of tonnes.
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tonnes of material
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in the beginning
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2002. It was
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at 21
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million
tonnes. The export through rail line in the
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from 40 tonnes and it was
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during 1978 to 1994 after that this was
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tonnes in last
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.
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1974 to 1978 was
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it follows
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at 69
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tonnes of
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goods
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. Then the growth of water
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way was stable
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untill
1998. In, 2002 it
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62
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, the transfer things by road vehicles was
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tonnes in the
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1974 and in the last 2002 it was reaching at the peek point
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99million
tonnes.
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, the highest amount of
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goods
was exported
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However
pipeline was the least
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over the entire period.
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