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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided graph shows the information regarding radio and television audiences from the month of october to December in the year 1992. From the given graph it is clear that UK population prefer watch TVover the radio. As per the graph, demand of the radio is sharply increased from 6 am to 8 am whereas demand for the TV is witenessed steady growth in the same time frame. The radio reaches at its peak at around 8 am when around 30% people listen to the radio and less than 10% people watches televiosion. After 8 am the demand for the radio is steadily decreased till 2 pm, however, there is sudden bump is seen in the radio listneing at 4 pm. The listening on the radio remain on decline till 2 am and almost reaches to the zero at 2 am. On the other hand, TV viewership is steadily increased and reaches almost 50% by 8 pm after that demand for the TV also steadily decrases. Similar to the radio, viewership for the TV also reaches to 0% by 2 AM. From the above grapgh it is clear that, people tend to prefer listening radio in the morning period, whereas consumers tend to prefer watching TV in the evening.
The provided graph
shows
the information regarding
radio
and television audiences from the month of
october
to December in the year 1992. From the
given
graph it is
clear
that UK population prefer
watch
TVover
the radio.

As per the graph,
demand
of the
radio
is
sharply
increased from 6 am to 8 am whereas
demand
for the TV is
witenessed
steady growth in the same time frame. The
radio
reaches
at its peak at around 8 am when around 30%
people
listen to the
radio
and less than 10%
people
watches
televiosion
. After 8 am the
demand
for the
radio
is
steadily
decreased till 2 pm,
however
, there is sudden bump is
seen
in the
radio
listneing
at 4 pm. The listening on the
radio
remain on decline till 2 am and almost
reaches
to the zero at 2 am.

On the other hand
, TV viewership is
steadily
increased and
reaches
almost 50% by 8 pm after that
demand
for the TV
also
steadily
decrases
. Similar to the
radio
, viewership for the TV
also
reaches
to 0% by 2 AM.

From the above
grapgh
it is
clear
that,
people
tend to prefer listening
radio
in the morning period, whereas consumers tend to prefer watching TV in the evening.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

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