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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The given graph indicates a survey result of buying and drinking coffee and tea habits that the people in five Australian cities have. According to the given information, the Australian residents prefer going to a café for coffee or tea rather than buying fresh and instant coffee in last two weeks. The cities in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart have people who prefer café for coffee or tea rather than Brisbane and Adelaide which is over 6 percent. And also, Brisbane and Adelaide have only around 34 percent who love to drink fresh coffee in last 4 weeks by the results of a survey. The people in Sydney and Melbourne also dislike to buy fresh coffee which is only 43 percent due to the results of survey. Hobart and Brisbane hold the people who crazy about buying instant coffee which is nearly 55 percent. Buying fresh and instant coffee in Adelaide is equally 50 percent during the last 4 weeks. Melbourne has nearly 6 percent more than Sydney of buying instant coffee.
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and tea habits that the
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people
in five Australian cities have.

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information, the Australian residents prefer going to a café for
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coffee
or tea
rather
than
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buying
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fresh
and instant
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coffee
in last two weeks.

The cities in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart have
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people
who prefer café for
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coffee
or tea
rather
than Brisbane and Adelaide which is over 6
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. And
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, Brisbane and Adelaide have
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around 34
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who
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love
to drink
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fresh
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coffee
in last 4 weeks by the results of a survey. The
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people
in Sydney and Melbourne
also
dislike to
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buy
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fresh
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coffee
which is
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only
43
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due to the results of survey.

Hobart and Brisbane hold the
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people
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who crazy
about
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instant
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coffee
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55
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percent
.
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Buying
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fresh
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in Adelaide is
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50
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percent
during the last 4 weeks. Melbourne has
nearly
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percent
more than Sydney of
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coffee
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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6.0
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