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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The above chart illustrates the distribution of consumption, the expendeture and the population of the world. Overall it is observed that countries like USA and Europe consume around 60 percent of the world resources whereas the remaining countries hold a total share of 40 percent. Asia leads the population chart whereas the least world spending occurs in the Clothing sector. In the sector of world population, Asia contributes 57% of the total population being the largest in this sector whereas Africa, America and Europe have 10% 14% and 14% of the population respectively. The majority of the world spending is on other resources except the Food, Housing, Clothing and Transport sections, the total spending of the above mentioned sectors contribute to over 60% which is comparatively lesser than the Other sector of world spending having a value of 40% alone. The world spending on Housing and Clothing sums up to equate with the Transport sector.
The above chart illustrates the distribution of consumption, the
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expendeture
and the
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population
of the world.

Overall
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is observed
that countries
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like USA
and Europe consume around 60 percent of the
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world
resources whereas the remaining countries hold a total share of 40 percent. Asia leads the
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population
chart whereas the least
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world
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spending
occurs in the Clothing sector.

In the
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sector
of
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world
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population
, Asia contributes 57% of the total
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population
being the largest in this
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sector
whereas Africa, America and Europe have 10% 14% and 14% of the
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population
respectively
.

The majority of the
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world
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spending
is on other resources except the Food, Housing, Clothing and Transport sections, the total
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spending
of the above mentioned
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sectors
contribute to over 60% which is
comparatively
lesser than the Other
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sector
of
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world
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spending
having a value of 40% alone. The
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world
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spending
on Housing and Clothing sums up to equate with the Transport
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sector
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

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