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A comparison between the TV viewing population and the radio audiences (over 4 years) in the UK during the last three months of 1992 is drawn in the given line graph.

A comparison between the TV viewing population and the radio audiences (over 4 years) in the UK during the last three months of 1992 is drawn in the given line graph. In general, the share of TV viewers was higher than the on air entertainers and this trend was evident in the afternoon, especially in the evening. As per the chart, whether it is TV or radio, the proportion of audiences remained less in the early morning (under 5). However, this rate soared in case of radio audiences after 6 am to reach just over 25 by 8 am. Thereafter, this proportion fell almost at a gradual rate back to around 5 by 12 am and further to 3 by 2 am. Despite remaining subdued till around 12 pm, the rate of TV viewers overtook the radio audiences at 1 pm, when it registered around 16% viewers. After a couple of hours, this rate rocketed to reach around 45%, at 9 pm. From this point, the rate of its viewers dwindled to reach about 3 at 2 am, the time when the rate of audiences for both TV and radio stood the least.
A comparison between the TV viewing population and the
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radio
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audiences
(over 4 years) in the UK during the last three months of 1992
is drawn
in the
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given
line graph.

In general
, the share of TV
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viewers
was higher than the on air entertainers and this trend was evident in the afternoon,
especially
in the evening.

As per the chart, whether it is TV or
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radio
, the proportion of
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audiences
remained less in the early morning (under 5).
However
, this
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rate
soared in case of
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radio
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audiences
after 6 am to reach
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just
over 25 by 8 am. Thereafter, this proportion fell almost at a gradual
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rate
back to
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around
5 by 12 am and
further
to 3 by 2 am.

Despite remaining subdued till
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around
12 pm, the
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rate
of TV
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viewers
overtook the
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radio
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audiences
at 1 pm, when it registered
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around
16%
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viewers
. After a couple of hours, this
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rate
rocketed to reach
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around
45%, at 9 pm. From this point, the
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rate
of its
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viewers
dwindled to reach about 3 at 2 am, the time when the
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rate
of
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audiences
for both TV and
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radio
stood the least.
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IELTS academic A comparison between the TV viewing population and the radio audiences (over 4 years) in the UK during the last three months of 1992 is drawn in the given line graph.

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