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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The three pie charts presented here show us world spending, world population and consumption resources date. The world spending data is split base on the categories the money are spent. Food take the largest portion of 24%, with transport closely behind at 18%. Other notable categories are housing at 12% and clothing at 6%. The rest of miscellenous spending make up the rest 40% in the other category. The world population data is base on continent. Asia is clearly the elephant in the room in term of population with 57% of the world population. Europe and America both are at 14% with Africa behind at 10%. Other nations that doesn't belong to any of these continent collectively make up 5% of the world population. The consumption of resource chart is split into U. S. A. /Europe at 60% and others are 40%. Despite only making up less than 28% of the world population the U. S. A. and Europe take up majority of world's resource consumption. This value is expected as U. S. A. and most of Europe(European Union, EEA, Switzerland and UK) are some of the most developed regions in the world.

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