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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of radio and television audiences over 4 years old in UK during the period of October-December 1992. In case of television, it has a low number of audiences in early morning, but this number grows gradually until 8 a. m. There is a slight decline in next two hours. However, it becomes higher after noon and reaches 45% during the evening. Then the number of people watching TV falls gradually and at 2 a. m. has the lowest point. Talking about radio audiences, its peak can be seen in the morning, especially at 8 a. m. when the percentage frows up to 38%. It is also characterized by a gradual fall during the day, but there are some fluctuations. The least number of people who listen to the radio is from 2 a. m. to 4 a. m. Overall, television is mostly watched from 5 p. m. to 9 p. m. , while radio is more popular in the morning. Moreover, television is more preferable by UK population than radio.
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and
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audiences over 4 years
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old
in UK during the period of October-December 1992.

In case of
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television
, it has a low
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number
of audiences in early morning,
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this
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number
grows
gradually
until 8 a. m. There is a slight decline in
next
two hours.
However
, it becomes higher after noon and reaches 45% during the evening. Then the
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number
of
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people
watching TV falls
gradually
and at 2 a. m. has the lowest point.

Talking about
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radio
audiences, its peak can be
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seen
in the morning,
especially
at 8 a. m. when the percentage frows up to 38%. It is
also
characterized by a gradual fall during the day,
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there are
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some
fluctuations. The least
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number
of
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people
who listen to the
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radio
is from 2 a. m. to 4 a. m.

Overall
,
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television
is
mostly
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watched
from 5 p. m. to 9 p. m. , while
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radio
is more popular in the morning.
Moreover
,
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television
is more preferable by UK population than
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radio
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

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