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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of brick manufacturing for the building industry. It involves seven different steps, starring with the digging of clay and finishing with the delivery of bricks. First of all, clay is dug with the help of a digger and after that it is filtered through a metal grid on a roller. Next step consists in adding sand and water to the clay and this mixture is poured into a mould or wire cutter. Then bricks are sent to a drying oven for 24-28 hours. The following stage is when bricks are put into kilns and are heated from up to 980 degree first, and up to 1300 degree after that. They are then cooled in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Final steps are to pack cooled bricks and to deliver them to customers by trucks. In general, brick manufacturing is a complex and prolonged process which includes seven steps.
The diagram illustrates the process of
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brick
manufacturing for the building industry. It involves seven
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, starring with the digging of clay and finishing with the delivery of bricks.

First
of all, clay
is dug
with the
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of a digger and after that it
is filtered
through a metal grid on a roller.
Next
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step
consists in adding sand and water to the clay and this mixture
is poured
into a mould or wire cutter. Then
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bricks
are
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sent
to a drying oven for 24-28 hours. The following stage is when
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bricks
are put
into kilns and
are heated
from up to 980 degree
first
, and up to 1300 degree after that. They are then cooled in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Final
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are to pack cooled
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bricks
and to deliver them to customers by trucks.

In general
,
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brick
manufacturing is a complex and prolonged process which includes seven
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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6.0
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