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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart provides information about the destination of anthropology graduation from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table gives information about the salaries of the anthropologist in work after 5 years. Overall, according to the pie chart, most of the anthropology graduates worked fulltime, while the table provide information about the different rang of salaries in three different type of employment. According to the pie chart, for the most part of graduates work full time, with 52%. The second place occupied by part time work, with 15%. Similarly with unemployed, in the third place, with 12%. Surprisingly, there are three type of destination have same result, which is in full time postgrad study and not know destination with 8% in each destination of work. And 5% of part time work + postgrad study as the smallest proposition of the chart. Furthermore, the salaries of freelance consultant in anthropology graduates are mostly get under 100 thousand dollars with 60% from the responses. And contrast with government sector that 50% of the anthropology graduates get 100 dollars. And only 30% anthropology graduates get 100 thousand dollars from private companies.
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graduation from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table gives information about the salaries of the anthropologist in
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after 5 years.
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, according to the pie
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, most of the
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anthropology
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worked fulltime, while the table provide information about the
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rang of salaries in three
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type of employment. According to the pie
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, with 52%. The second place occupied by part
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, with 15%.
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have same result, which is in full
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postgrad study and not know
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with 8% in each
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+ postgrad study as the smallest proposition of the
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under 100 thousand dollars with 60% from the responses. And contrast with
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sector that 50% of the
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100 dollars. And
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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