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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph describes a data that reflects percentage of British people that donating money to charity. It compares gathered information separately between 1990 and 2010 years. In most cases, percentage of donations has been decreased but there are also cases of increasing. For example, the age range of 18-25 have a significant decrease of people that giving money to charity. In 1990 it was about 17% of people but in 2010 it diminished to 7%. This age range got the most loss of all other categories. Overwhelming 10% decrease! The age between 26-35 got a percentage decrease equal to 7%, from 31% in 1990 to 24% in 2010. People that are 36-50 years old also lost people that were interested in charity. In 1990 it was about 42% people but it dropped by 7% to 35% in 2010. There is also a tendency that older people are more often engaged in charity than young people. The category of 51 to 65 years old got the boost of people that involved to charity. It increased to 39% at 2010 from 35% at 1990. Also people that are older than 65 years old became more interested in charity. The percentage of people increased from 32% to 35%. To sum up, the number of people that are involved in charity in Britain is decreased by 17% and all of these 17% of people are concentrated in an age of 18-50 years old.
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percentage
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people
that donating money to
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charity
. It compares gathered information
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between 1990 and 2010 years.

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,
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percentage
of donations has
been decreased
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but
there are
also
cases of increasing.
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age
range of 18-25 have a significant decrease of
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people
that giving money to
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charity
. In 1990 it was about 17% of
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people
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but
in 2010 it diminished to 7%. This
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age
range
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got
the most loss of all other categories. Overwhelming 10% decrease! The
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age
between 26-35
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got
a
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percentage
decrease equal to 7%, from 31% in 1990 to 24% in 2010.
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People
that are 36-50 years
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old
also
lost
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people
that
were interested
in
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charity
. In 1990 it was about 42%
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people
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but
it dropped by 7% to 35% in 2010.

There is
also
a tendency that older
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people
are more
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often
engaged in
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charity
than young
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people
. The category of 51 to 65 years
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old
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got
the boost of
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people
that involved to
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charity
. It increased to 39% at 2010 from 35% at 1990.
Also
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people
that are older than 65 years
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old
became more interested in
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charity
. The
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percentage
of
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people
increased from 32% to 35%.

To sum up, the number of
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people
that
are involved
in
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charity
in Britain
is decreased
by 17% and all of these 17% of
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people
are concentrated
in an
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age
of 18-50 years
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old
.

IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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