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The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992. v.1

The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992. v. 1
The supplied line graph shows data on the radio and TV audiences of UK throughout a day of October- Dec in the year 1992. As is presented in the graph, people listen to radio from 5: 30 am to 1: 00 pm more than they watch TV while they prefer to watch television programs from 1: 00 pm to 11: 00 pm more than they listen to the radio. According to the line graph, only around 5% people who are over 4 years old listened to the radio or watched TV programs at 1: 00 am at night. This percentage remained almost unchanged till 5: 30 am next day and after that, the radio audiences increased remarkably and reached to around 25% at around 9: 00 am. During this time very few people watched TV amounting on an average 5% of total population. After 9: 00 in the morning, the radio listeners’ percentage kept on decreasing and reached to 5% at 7: 00 in the evening and remained at this level till the next day morning. On the other hand, the TV viewers’ percentage increased after 2: 30 pm and reached to 45% at around 9: 30 pm at night. In summary, almost half of the UK people watch TV from 5: 30 pm to 9: 30 pm while 25% people from the UK listened to radio from 5: 30 am till 1: 00 pm.
The supplied line graph
shows
data on the
radio
and TV audiences of UK throughout a day of
October- Dec
in the year 1992. As
is presented
in the graph,
people
listen to
radio
from 5: 30 am to 1: 00 pm more than they
watch
TV while they prefer to
watch
television programs from 1: 00 pm to 11: 00 pm more than they listen to the radio.

According to the line graph,
only
around
5%
people
who are over 4 years
old
listened to the
radio
or
watched
TV programs at 1: 00 am at night. This percentage remained almost unchanged till 5: 30 am
next
day and after that, the
radio
audiences increased
remarkably
and reached to
around
25% at
around
9: 00 am. During this time
very
few
people
watched
TV amounting on an average 5% of total population. After 9: 00 in the morning, the
radio
listeners’ percentage
kept
on decreasing and reached to 5% at 7: 00 in the evening and remained at this level till the
next
day morning.
On the other hand
, the TV viewers’ percentage increased after 2: 30 pm and reached to 45% at
around
9: 30
pm at night
.

In summary, almost half of the UK
people
watch
TV from 5: 30 pm to 9: 30 pm while 25%
people
from the UK listened to
radio
from 5: 30 am till 1: 00 pm.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992. v. 1

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235 words
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