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The graph below shows predictions about the sales of three major comic book publishers between 2020.

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The line graph illustrates predictions as regard to the sales of three main books publishers between 2020. In the year of 2020, the sales of dark horse started at 100 millions. After that the sales of horse books increased gradually from 100 to 500 millions copies. 200 millions copies of DC book sold in the year of 2020. Next two years in between 2020 to 2022 sales are risen approximately 300 millions. Afterwords, from 2022 to 2024 sales remained at the same. From 2024 to 2026 sales increased slightly. In the years of 2026 to 2030 the sales of DC was went up dramatically around 315 to just near 600 millions copies. In 2020, around 550 millions copies of marvel books are sold. Between 2020 to 2024 marvel books sales increased dramatically from 550 to 700 millions copies. Then, in the next two years book slaes risen dramatically near 650 to over 700 millions copies. Finally, the period of 2020 to 2030 the slaes of three books fluctuated.
The line graph illustrates predictions as regard to the
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publishers between 2020. In the
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of 2020, the
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of dark horse
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of horse
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increased
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millions
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. 200
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of DC
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sold in the
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of 2020.
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two years in
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between 2020 to 2022
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are risen
approximately 300
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millions
. Afterwords, from 2022 to 2024
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remained at the same. From 2024 to 2026
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increased
slightly
. In the years of 2026 to 2030 the
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of DC was
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near 600
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. In 2020, around 550
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of marvel
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are sold
.
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marvel
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increased
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millions
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. Then, in the
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risen
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fluctuated.
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