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Summarising and reporting

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The given line chart makes the comparison regarding unemployment between rural areas and urban areas in Australia in 2012 It is evident that the percentage of unemployed citizens in rural areas experienced a downward trend. Conversely, an upward trend was recorded in the figure for urban areas. Looking now at the former more specifically, the proportion of residents who do not have a job was slightly above 6% at the beginning of the surveyed period, which tripled the data of those living in urban areas. Thereafter, the unemployment rate showed a moderate dip and reached its nadir, about in the middle of 4%-5% at the end of the second quarter, preceding a mild turnaround and ended at approximately 5% in the last period With respect to the latter, the figure for urban areas in the first time recording was about 2%. Over the following 6 months, the percentage of unemployed inhabitants ascended gradually before hitting the bottom at 2% then witnessed an abrupt recovery to roughly 4% in the third quarter. Afterwards, in the remaining phase, it reveals a steady growth and finished at nearly 5%
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the comparison regarding unemployment between rural
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areas
and
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urban
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areas
in Australia in 2012

It is evident that the percentage of unemployed citizens in rural
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experienced a downward trend.
Conversely
, an upward trend
was recorded
in the figure for
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urban
areas.

Looking
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now
at the former more
specifically
, the proportion of residents who do not have a job was
slightly
above 6% at the beginning of the surveyed period, which tripled the data of those living in
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urban
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areas
. Thereafter, the unemployment rate
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showed
a moderate dip and reached its nadir, about in the middle of 4%-5% at the
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end
of the second quarter, preceding a mild turnaround and ended at approximately 5% in the last period

With respect to the latter, the figure for
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urban
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areas
in the
first
time recording was about 2%. Over the following 6 months, the percentage of unemployed inhabitants ascended
gradually
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hitting the bottom at 2% then witnessed an abrupt recovery to roughly 4% in the third quarter. Afterwards, in the remaining phase, it reveals a steady growth and finished at
nearly
5%

IELTS academic Summarising and reporting

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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