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the graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

the graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. PBq2
the line chart gives information about the raising population in two countries India and China from the year 2000 to 2050. The population numbers in terms of billions. Overall, it is clearly showing that, in India, the population has continually boosted from the year 2000 to 2050, while, in China, the growth of the urban is quite lower than in India. In the beginning, in the year 2000, India has only a 1000 billion population but in the same year, China has around 1250 billion citizens. In the year 2025, the growth of the population rapidly increases up to approximately 1420 and 1320 billion in both the countries China and India respectively. However, in the year 2030, both regions have the same residents figure around 1430 billion. Since then, in China, public rates have dropped significantly to 1400 billion in the year 2050. Meanwhile, the population rate in India has been steadily increasing up to the nearest 1600 billion from the year 2030 to 2050.
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population
in two countries India and China from the
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2000 to 2050. The
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numbers in terms of billions.

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, it is
clearly
showing that, in India, the
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population
has
continually
boosted from the
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2000 to 2050, while, in China, the growth of the urban is quite lower than in India.

In the beginning, in the
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2000, India has
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a 1000
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in the same
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, China has around 1250
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citizens. In the
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2025, the growth of the
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rapidly
increases up to approximately 1420 and 1320
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billion
in both the countries China and India
respectively
.
However
, in the
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2030, both regions have the same residents figure around 1430 billion.

Since then, in China, public rates have dropped
significantly
to 1400
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in the
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2050. Meanwhile, the
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rate in India has been
steadily
increasing up to the nearest 1600
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from the
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2030 to 2050.
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