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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. 2EmX
THE BAR GRAPH DESCRIBES THE ACTIVITY OF SOMELAND'S PRIMARY EXPORTS NAMELY MEAT PRODUCTS, DAIRY AND INTERNATIONAL TOURISM. THE DATA COMPARES FIGURES RECORDED FROM 2005TO 2015 WITH THE PROJECTION OF THE FUTURE. OVER ALL, MEAT PRODUCTS HAD THE LEAST PERFORMANCE AMONG THE THREE CATEGORIES IN 2005 WHILE INTERNATIONAL TOURISM WAS THE LARGEST EARNER. IT IS ALSO CLEAR THAT THE LATTER IS PROJECTED TO PLUMMET IN 2025 WHEREAS MEAT AND DAIRY PRODUCTS WILL LIKELY TO DECLINE. IN DETAILS, MEAT PRODUCTS REVENUE WAS $4 BILLION IN 2005, IN WHICH AROUND $0. 5 BILLION DECREASE WAS SEEN AFTER A DECADE. THIS FIGURE IS FORECASTED TO BACK DOWN AT ABOUT $3BILLION BY 2025. MEANWHILE, DAIRY PRODUCTS GARNERED APROXIMATELY $5 BILLION IN 2005 WHICH DRAMATICALLY SOARED TO NEARLY $8BILLION IN 2015 AND IS EXPECTED TO FALL BY A LITTLE THAN IN THE FUTURE. AMONG THE PRIMARY INDUSTRIES, INTERNATIONAL TOURISM WAS NOTED TO HAVE CONTINUOUS RISE FROM OVER $6BILLION IN 2005 WITH A SLIGHT INCREASE TO ALMOST $7BILLION IN 2015. IT IS ALSO PREDICTED TO LEAP AT NEARLY $8 BILLION IN 2025 WHICH WAS IDENTICAL TO THAT OF DAIRY PRODUCTS VALUE IN 2015.
THE BAR GRAPH
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DESCRIBES
THE ACTIVITY OF
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SOMELAND
'S PRIMARY EXPORTS
NAMELY
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MEAT
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PRODUCTS
,
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DAIRY
AND INTERNATIONAL TOURISM. THE DATA COMPARES FIGURES RECORDED FROM 2005TO 2015 WITH THE PROJECTION OF THE FUTURE.

OVER ALL,
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MEAT
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PRODUCTS
HAD THE LEAST PERFORMANCE AMONG THE THREE CATEGORIES IN 2005 WHILE INTERNATIONAL TOURISM WAS THE LARGEST EARNER. IT IS
ALSO
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CLEAR
THAT THE LATTER
IS PROJECTED
TO PLUMMET IN 2025 WHEREAS
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MEAT
AND
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DAIRY
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PRODUCTS
WILL LIKELY TO DECLINE.

IN
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DETAILS
,
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MEAT
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PRODUCTS
REVENUE WAS $4
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BILLION
IN 2005, IN WHICH AROUND $0. 5
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BILLION
DECREASE WAS
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SEEN
AFTER A DECADE. THIS FIGURE
IS FORECASTED
TO BACK DOWN AT ABOUT
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$3BILLION
BY 2025. MEANWHILE,
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DAIRY
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PRODUCTS
GARNERED
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APROXIMATELY
$5
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BILLION
IN 2005 WHICH
DRAMATICALLY
SOARED TO
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$8BILLION
IN 2015 AND IS
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EXPECTED
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LITTLE
THAN IN THE FUTURE.

AMONG THE PRIMARY INDUSTRIES, INTERNATIONAL TOURISM
WAS NOTED
TO HAVE CONTINUOUS RISE FROM OVER
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$6BILLION
IN 2005 WITH A SLIGHT INCREASE TO ALMOST
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$7BILLION
IN 2015. IT IS
ALSO
PREDICTED TO LEAP AT
NEARLY
$8
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BILLION
IN 2025 WHICH WAS IDENTICAL TO THAT OF
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PRODUCTS
VALUE IN 2015.
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