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The bar char shows the total number of calls in minutes, divided into 3 different categories from 1995 to 2002.

The bar char shows the total number of calls in minutes, divided into 3 different categories from 1995 to 2002. Gagw
The bar chart illustrates the total number of UK telephone calls, in minutes (billions), categorized as Local call, National and international call, and mobiles between 1995 and 2002, a period of 8 years. Overall, the local calls showed an upward trend reaching the peak till mid-year and started declining after that, while the other two types of calls gradually increased over the given period, with mobile calls rising significantly in the later years. Regarding the National and International calls, the starting year witnessed around 40 billion minutes in 1995, and this number kept on growing slowly until it reached the peak of about 60 billions in the final year. Similarly, in case of mobiles, the initial year 1995 recorded less than 5 billion minutes of call and this number continued increasing moderately until 1999 reaching at about 10 billion minutes, but after that there was considerable growth hitting the peak of approximately 50 billion minutes in 2002. In total, mobile calls saw the tremendous increase of 45 billion minutes during 1995 and 2002. In terms of local calls, UK people spent 70 billion minutes in 1995 and the numbers kept on increasing, finally hitting the peak of almost 90 billion minutes in 1998. This number plateau till 1999 and there was gradual decline after that reaching to same amount of minutes as in the start.
The bar chart illustrates the total
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number
of UK telephone
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calls
, in minutes
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(billions)
, categorized as Local
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call
, National and international
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call
, and mobiles between 1995 and 2002, a period of 8 years.

Overall
, the local
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calls
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showed
an upward trend reaching the
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peak
till mid-year and
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started
declining after that, while the other two types of
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calls
gradually
increased over the
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given
period, with mobile
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calls
rising
significantly
in the later years.

Regarding the National and International
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calls
, the starting year witnessed around 40
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billion
minutes in 1995, and this
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number
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kept
on growing
slowly
until it reached the
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peak
of about 60
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billions
in the final year.
Similarly
, in case of mobiles, the initial year 1995 recorded less than 5
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billion
minutes of
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call
and this
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number
continued increasing
moderately
until 1999 reaching at about 10
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billion
minutes,
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but
after that there was considerable growth hitting the
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peak
of approximately 50
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billion
minutes in 2002. In total, mobile
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calls
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saw
the tremendous increase of 45
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billion
minutes during 1995 and 2002.

In terms of local
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calls
, UK
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people
spent 70
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billion
minutes in 1995 and the
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numbers
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kept
on increasing,
finally
hitting the
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peak
of almost 90
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billion
minutes in 1998. This
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number
plateau till 1999 and there was gradual decline after that reaching to same amount of minutes as in the
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start
.
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IELTS academic The bar char shows the total number of calls in minutes, divided into 3 different categories from 1995 to 2002.

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