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The graph below shows number of road casualties in great britain in repect to age of male and female car drivers between the year 2000 and 2002

The graph below shows number of road casualties in great britain in repect to age of male and female car drivers between the year 2000 and 2002 Nlknm
The presented line graph demonstrates the number of fatal accidents and age of drivers for both the genders in great Britain from 2000 to 2002. Examining the first graph for female, the started from teenager 10 to 15 age zero number accidents. There was a moderate rise at 16 to 19 age. Then, they was even maximum peak at half a quarter of 20 to 24 age. By 25 to 84 age there was a steady fall elderly age. Next, than decline at 89 age. Analysis the male, teenager a dramatic surge around 150 accident 20 - 24 age. The six time a more than female increase. Then, a gradual decrease at 100 accident earlier age. Moreover, a sharply declined roughly 50 number of middle age. By 50 age, a surprising increase. In addition, 50 to 84 age saw a flucation in the senior citizens. At the end, with the rate fell steadily in 94 age. Overall, it can be said that males more than females are accidents were in teenager age around 150 number. Females, earlier age 20-24 age roughly 25 number.
The presented line graph demonstrates the
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zero
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. There was a moderate rise at 16 to 19
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. By 25 to 84
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there was a steady fall elderly
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decline at 89
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a dramatic surge around 150
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20 - 24
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around 150
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IELTS academic The graph below shows number of road casualties in great britain in repect to age of male and female car drivers between the year 2000 and 2002

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