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The below chart illustrates marrige and divorce rates in the UK during the latter part of the twentieth century

The below chart illustrates marrige and divorce rates in the UK during the latter part of the twentieth century Kl85k
The marriage and divorce numbers in the UK over a period of thirty eight years from 1961 to 1999 are described by the below linechart. Overall, the first marriages number witnessed the downward trend. In contrast, the divorces number and remarriages one showed the upward trend. In spite of that the first marriages number was always the highest comparing to other numbers. On one hand, the first marriges number hit the peak at about 400 thousands in 1970. After that, the first marriage number plunged from 400 thousands to 200 thousands in 1999. On the other hand, in thirty years, the divorces number inclined sharply from about 25 thounsands to 150 thousands and the remarriages number rose gradually from around 50 thoundsands to about 100 thounsands.
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in the UK over a period of
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, the
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marriages
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witnessed the downward trend.
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and remarriages one
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was always the highest comparing to other numbers.

On one hand, the
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marriges
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hit the peak at about 400 thousands in 1970. After that, the
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plunged from 400 thousands to 200 thousands in 1999.
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inclined
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to 150 thousands and the remarriages
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rose
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IELTS academic The below chart illustrates marrige and divorce rates in the UK during the latter part of the twentieth century

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