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The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. 07jq
Each one of the two pie charts in figure presents data on total allocation of resources from the government among 9 common economic points in a political agenda. The surveyed years are 2010 and 2015. Despite not having total numbers to judge how total expenditure has changed, the two charts clearly show two scenarios where allocation of resources moderately decreases for the major sectors such as education, healthcare and defence, in favor of areas that were little relevant in 2010. In particular, education, healthcare, pensions and defence used to absorb the largest shares of government resources, respectively 24%, 21%, 19% and 17%. Thus four sectors cost more than 75% of total expenditure. On the other hand, welfare received 8% of government funds, 1/3 of what education received. The government also used to register 5% of total expenditure in interest paid on borrowing. On the contrary, 2015 witnessed a shift in resources towards welfare and interests on debt. The former increased by 5% to 13% while the latter doubled touching 10%. It should be noticed how the major sectors of focus for the government recorded multiple falls. Education and Defence saw a downward trend, losing 3% of total funds allocated in 2010 (respectively 21% and 14% in 2015), while healthcare lost a modest 1%. The portion of funds allocated to pensions did not change as it remained at 19% also in 2015.
Each one of the two pie charts in figure presents data on
total
allocation of resources from the
government
among 9 common economic points in a political agenda. The surveyed years are 2010 and 2015. Despite not having
total
numbers to judge how
total
expenditure has
changed
, the two charts
clearly
show
two scenarios where allocation of resources
moderately
decreases for the major sectors such as
education
, healthcare and
defence
, in favor of areas that were
little
relevant in 2010.

In particular
,
education
, healthcare, pensions and
defence
used
to absorb the largest shares of
government
resources,
respectively
24%, 21%, 19% and 17%.
Thus
four sectors cost more than 75% of
total
expenditure.
On the other hand
, welfare received 8% of
government
funds, 1/3 of what
education
received. The
government
also
used
to register 5% of
total
expenditure in interest paid on borrowing.

On the contrary
, 2015 witnessed a shift in resources towards welfare and interests on debt. The former increased by 5% to 13% while the latter doubled touching 10%.

It should
be noticed
how the major sectors of focus for the
government
recorded multiple falls.
Education
and
Defence
saw
a downward trend, losing 3% of
total
funds allocated in 2010 (
respectively
21% and 14% in 2015), while healthcare lost a modest 1%. The portion of funds allocated to pensions did not
change
as it remained at 19%
also
in 2015.
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IELTS academic The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

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