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The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. r8e6n
The chart indicates the percentage of employment rate in 6 nations which are Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, UK, New Zealand and the U. S. A in 1995 compared to 2005. Overall, it is clear from the chart that the proportion of employment rate in male was greater than in female for both years. In 1995, the majority of the male employment rate was in Iceland by 70%. The second was around 65% in Switzerland. New Zealand and the U. S. A also made up a significant proportion about 60%. Nearly 55% of the male employment rate was in Australia and UK. In contrast, the percentage of the female who had a job is less than male. Approximately 50% of women in Switzerland and UK were employed while only 40% of women in the U. S. A. and Iceland have a job to do. The female employment rate in Australia and New Zealand is under 30%. In 2005, men were employed more than women across 6 countries. Iceland was still the highest employment rate for men over 80% followed by Switzerland at nearly 80%, whereas, the rest were almost equal at around 70%. For female, Switzerland reached 70% of the female employment rate. The U. K. and the U. S. A. had about 60%. Australia and New Zealand had the least proportion of employment rate in a woman with under 40%
The chart indicates the percentage of
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in 6 nations which are Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, UK,
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Zealand and the U. S. A in 1995 compared to 2005.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the chart that the proportion of
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employment
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in male was greater than in
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female
for both years.

In 1995, the majority of the male
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employment
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rate
was in Iceland by 70%. The second was around 65% in Switzerland.
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Zealand and the U. S. A
also
made up a significant proportion about 60%.
Nearly
55% of the male
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employment
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rate
was in Australia and UK.
In contrast
, the percentage of the
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female
who had a job is less than male. Approximately 50% of women in Switzerland and UK
were employed
while
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only
40% of women in the U. S. A. and Iceland have a job to do. The
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female
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in Australia and
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Zealand is under 30%.

In 2005,
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men
were employed
more than women across 6 countries. Iceland was
still
the highest
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for
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over 80% followed by Switzerland at
nearly
80%, whereas, the rest were almost equal at around 70%. For
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, Switzerland reached 70% of the
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. The U. K. and the U. S. A. had about 60%. Australia and
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Zealand had the least proportion of
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in a woman with under 40%
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IELTS academic The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

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