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The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 56WLe
The chart illustrates the amount of houses that are built annually in 2 major cities of England (Derby and Nottingham) from the year 2000 to 2009. Or the above bar chart displays the comparison of the houses built in 2 major cities of England (derby and Nottingham) from the years 2000 to 2009. Overall, we can observe there is significant increase of new houses or homes in both the cities. Although, the increasing pattern has experienced serious fluctuations for the city of Nottingham comparatively, as per the data given derby is prone to steady increasing pattern. In the first year, Derby had constructed slightly lower number of houses(approximately 45) compared to the city of Nottingham which constructed exactly 50 houses. The year 2002 clearly reflects an opposite trend to the previous year. Derby has significantly increased by building twice the amount of houses (approximately 95) and Nottingham experienced a decline by accounting only 25 houses respectively. From the year 2003 to 2007, there was steady increase in houses around 120 houses built every year in derby whereas Nottingham appears to fluctuate but resulted favourably as it dramatically rose to180 new houses in the year 2007. On the other hand, the year 2008 surprised us as Nottingham just constructed approximately 10 new houses and derby outperformed by establishing around 260 houses. Finally in the year 2009, Derby recorded the highest number by houses built slightly lower than 350 houses and comparatively Nottingham recorded by just constructing 250 new houses respectively.
The chart illustrates the amount of
houses
that
are built
annually
in 2 major
cities
of England (Derby and Nottingham) from the
year
2000 to 2009. Or the above bar chart displays the comparison of the
houses
built in 2 major
cities
of England (derby and Nottingham) from the years 2000 to 2009.

Overall
, we can observe there is significant increase of
new
houses
or homes in both the
cities
. Although, the increasing pattern has experienced serious fluctuations for the city of Nottingham
comparatively
, as per the data
given
derby is prone to steady increasing pattern.

In the
first
year
, Derby had constructed
slightly
lower number of
houses
(approximately 45) compared to the city of Nottingham which constructed exactly 50
houses
. The
year
2002
clearly
reflects an opposite trend to the previous
year
. Derby has
significantly
increased by building twice the amount of
houses
(approximately 95) and Nottingham experienced a decline by accounting
only
25
houses
respectively
. From the
year
2003 to 2007, there was steady increase in
houses
around 120
houses
built every
year
in derby whereas Nottingham appears to fluctuate
but
resulted
favourably
as it
dramatically
rose to180
new
houses
in the
year
2007.

On the other hand
, the
year
2008 surprised us as Nottingham
just
constructed approximately 10
new
houses
and derby outperformed by establishing around 260
houses
.
Finally
in the
year
2009, Derby recorded the highest number by
houses
built
slightly
lower than 350
houses
and
comparatively
Nottingham recorded by
just
constructing 250
new
houses
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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