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The graph below shows information about car production by country since 2020 and prediction until 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about car production by country since 2020 and prediction until 2035. 0lb0G
The line graph illustrates the estimated number of cars produced in hundreds of thousands in four different countries over the period of fifteen years from 2020 to 2035. Overall, the quantities of cars manufactured in America, the UK and Japan are anticipated to witness a upward trend whereas that of China is predicted to see a contrasting movement over the given period. In the year 2020, starting at around 350 hundreds of thousands of car productions, Japan is a country producing the most cars, while the number of cars manufactured in the US was 300 hundreds of thousands. Besides, the figure for the British was noticeably lower around 200 hundreds of thousands, which was as twice as the figure for China. There has been a gradual growth of approximately 25 hundreds of thousands in China’s and Japan’s car productions from 2020 to 2025, while production of cars in the USA has dropped significantly to 200. The same period has experienced a steady decrease in that of the UK. Looking at the graph in more detail, between 2025 to 2035, it is suggested that the numbers of cars manufactured will decline considerably to under 100 hundreds of thousands in the UK, the USA, and Japan. Meanwhile, that of USA is predicted to go up slowly and reach a peak at 250 hundreds of thousands.
The line graph illustrates the estimated number of
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cars
produced in hundreds of thousands in four
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different
countries over the period of fifteen years from 2020 to 2035.

Overall
, the quantities of
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cars
manufactured in America, the UK and
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Japan
are anticipated
to witness
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a
upward trend whereas that of China
is predicted
to
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see
a contrasting movement over the
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given
period.

In the year 2020, starting at around
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350 hundreds of
thousands of
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car
productions,
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Japan
is a country producing the most
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cars
, while the number of
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cars
manufactured in the US was
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300 hundreds of
thousands.
Besides
, the figure for the British was
noticeably
lower around
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200 hundreds of
thousands, which was as twice as the figure for China. There has been a gradual growth of approximately
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25 hundreds of
thousands in China’s and
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Japan’s
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car
productions from 2020 to 2025, while production of
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cars
in the USA has dropped
significantly
to 200. The same period has experienced a steady decrease in that of the UK.

Looking at the graph in more detail,
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between 2025 to 2035
, it
is suggested
that the numbers of
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cars
manufactured will decline
considerably
to under
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100 hundreds of
thousands in the UK, the USA, and
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Japan
. Meanwhile, that
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of USA
is predicted
to go up
slowly
and reach a peak at
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250 hundreds of
thousands.
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