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Revenue's of Europe's Top Five Football Leagues

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The charts display the incomes of the european finest football competitions between the 99/00 and 04/05 campaign and its categorises, Overall, it can be seen that there are an increasing in yields within the period. The revenues are measured in billion of dollars (b). To begin with the mediterranean, the first of which is Serie A, (why start with Serie A? ) the number of return went up slighty from nearly 50. 8b in 1999 to almost 51. 5b in 2000 and fluctuated around 51. 4b until the start of the 2003/2004 campaign. There was a considerable jumped from roughly 51. 5b in 2003 to about 52. 5b in the end of the period. Next, there was a steady declined from almost 51b in 1999 to approximately 50. 8b in 2000 in Primera Liga's income. After the declination, it continued to jumped by 1/2b to about 51. 3b in 2004. The last one is Ligue 1, it climbed slowly from about 50. 7b in 1999 to around 50. 8b in 2002. It fell slightly by 0. 05b to about 50. 75b in 2003 and went back to the point of 2004 which was its peak. Moving to Germany and England, respectively. Bundesliga gaining soared from 50. 8b in 1999 to 51. 4b in 2002 and then went down gradually by 0. 1b to about 51. 3b in 2003. There was a moderately increase in the number of revenue of 0. 3b to roughly 51. 5b. In Premier League, there was a surged in income from almost 51. 5b in 1999 to about 52. 5b in 2003. Finally, the number hit a peak of roughly 52. 5b in 2004.
The charts display the incomes of the
european
finest
football competitions between the 99/00 and 04/05 campaign and its
categorises
,
Overall
, it can be
seen
that there are an increasing in yields within the period. The revenues
are measured
in
billion
of dollars (b).

To
begin
with the
mediterranean
, the
first
of which is Serie A, (why
start
with Serie A?
)
the number of return went up
slighty
from
nearly
50. 8b in 1999 to almost 51. 5b in 2000 and fluctuated around 51. 4b until the
start
of the 2003/2004 campaign. There was a considerable jumped from roughly 51. 5b in 2003 to about 52. 5b in the
end
of the period.
Next
, there was a steady declined from almost 51b in 1999 to approximately 50. 8b in 2000 in
Primera
Liga
's income. After the declination, it continued to jumped by 1/2b to about 51. 3b in 2004. The last one is
Ligue
1, it climbed
slowly
from about 50. 7b in 1999 to around 50. 8b in 2002. It fell
slightly
by 0. 05b to about 50. 75b in 2003 and went back to the point of 2004 which was its peak.

Moving to Germany and England,
respectively
. Bundesliga gaining soared from 50. 8b in 1999 to 51. 4b in 2002 and then went down
gradually
by 0. 1b to about 51. 3b in 2003. There was a
moderately increase
in the number of revenue of 0. 3b to roughly 51. 5b. In Premier League, there was a surged in income from almost 51. 5b in 1999 to about 52. 5b in 2003.
Finally
, the number hit a peak of roughly 52. 5b in 2004.
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