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The graph below shows how the European Union spent its budget in 2001. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant.

The graph below shows how the European Union spent its budget in 2001. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant. drwD7
The given graph pie char compares, in percentages, the different ways EU spent its money on five specific sectors, which are agriculture, regional aid, foregin aid, adminstration, research and also other which is unspecified in 2001. According to the pie graph, in 2001, the largest area of budget was in agriculture with 42%. The sector reginoal aid ranked second place at 31. 5%. Both them accounted for over 70% of the buget of EU. The rest of the given pie chart was in smaller ammounts compared to 2 sectors above, with 8. 5% was spent on foregin aid, 7 % in adminstration and 6% in reasearch. Also, this was followed by 5% was used in “others”, which is different because it is not clearly specified in the graph. In brief, it is obivous that an enormous ammount of money was taken in both agriculture and regional aid, while relatively little was used on other sectors such as adminstration and research.
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different
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sectors
, which are agriculture, regional
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aid
,
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foregin
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aid
,
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adminstration
, research and
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in 2001.

According to the pie graph, in 2001, the largest area of budget was in agriculture with 42%. The
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sector
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reginoal
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aid
ranked second place at 31. 5%. Both them accounted for over 70% of the
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buget
of EU.

The rest of the
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foregin
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aid
, 7 % in
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adminstration
and 6% in
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reasearch
.
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used
in “others”, which is
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, it is
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obivous
that an enormous
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of money
was taken
in both agriculture and regional
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aid
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was
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adminstration
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IELTS academic The graph below shows how the European Union spent its budget in 2001. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant.

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  American English
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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