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The graph below shows how much money was spent on tourist infrastructure in four different European countries from 1980 to 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows how much money was spent on tourist infrastructure in four different European countries from 1980 to 1992. 6NOql
The graph illustrates the amount of money which were spent for tourist infrastructure in four different countries in Europe over twelve-year period in 1980 to 1992. Overall, it is clear from the graph that whereas UK and France increased spending on tourist infrastructure, Spain witnessed a no change. Another interesting point is that in the year of 1990 Germany and Spain spent an equal amount of money. Looking at the UK and France, these countries witnessed a parallel side change during the 1980-1992. Whereas UK began started from approximately 55€ millions, France increased suddenly around 20€ millions in 1980, both climbing steadily to similarly high levels, 80€ millions, in 1992. In additional, despite spending of both Spain and Germany experiencing similarly level in the 1990, it’s about 50€ millions, then the former surged to 60 € millions, the latter fell to 40€ millions in 1992.
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for tourist infrastructure in four
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countries in Europe over twelve-year period in 1980 to 1992.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the graph that whereas UK and France increased spending on tourist infrastructure, Spain witnessed a no
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change
. Another interesting point is that in the year of 1990 Germany and Spain spent an equal amount of money.

Looking at the UK and France, these countries witnessed a parallel side
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change
during the 1980-1992. Whereas UK began
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from approximately
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55€
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, France increased
suddenly
around
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20€
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millions
in 1980, both climbing
steadily
to
similarly
high levels,
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80€
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millions
, in 1992. In additional, despite spending of both Spain and Germany experiencing
similarly
level in the 1990, it’s about
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50€
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millions
, then the former surged to
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60 €
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, the latter fell to
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40€
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in 1992.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows how much money was spent on tourist infrastructure in four different European countries from 1980 to 1992.

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