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the graph below show the changes in global food and oil price between 2000 and 2011

the graph below show the changes in global food and oil price between 2000 and 2011 6NOPr
The line chart compares a world in terms of the price of food index and average oil over period eleven years. During the research, we saw rose significantly of prices in both oil and food. Additionally, the trends for both commodities were very similar, and so a strong correlation (93. 6%) is suggested. In 2000, the number of food price index stood at nearly 85 points, while the average oil price was $25 per barrel. Over following seven years, both prices of oil and food witnessed a sharply increase, by about nearly $60 per barrel, and to 50 points figures of average oil price. The significantly went up in both commodities prices was seen from 2007 and 2008, with oil prices reaching a peak of $130 per barrel, and the food price index rising to $230 points. However, the prices experienced a drop from 2009 to 2010, and then rose sharply to $240 points and $100 per barrel respectively in 2011
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index and average
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over period eleven years.

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, while the average
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was $25 per
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. Over following seven years, both
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witnessed a
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reaching a peak of $130 per
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