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The graph below shows a typical American and japanese office .

The graph below shows a typical American and japanese office. bbMg6
The map depicts that compare the layout of Japanese office and American office and there are many similarities between Japanese office and American office. A glance at picture apparently delineates that In typical japanese office has only three rooms but In American office has seven rooms. Commencing with japanese office, the office is situated in square area so at the top of office has department manager cabin and aslo a window in the cabin and the front side of department office has two cabin both are section manager rooms and the lower side of section managar office has a big hall And In hall has separate sitting area for small employers. Moving towards, typical American office, In the centre of the office, there is a big main hall and also set chairs for sitting in hall and right side of office has three cabins, two are selection managar cabin and one is department managar office and the left side of main hall has 4rooms two are conference room and next two rooms are storage and photography room.
The map depicts that compare the layout of Japanese
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and American
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office
and there are
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similarities between Japanese
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office
and American
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office
. A glance at picture
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japanese
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office
has
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only
three
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rooms
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In American
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office
has seven
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rooms
. Commencing with
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japanese
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office
, the
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is situated
in square area
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so
at the top of
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has department manager
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cabin
and
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a window in the
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cabin
and the front side of department
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office
has two
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cabin
both are section manager
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rooms
and the lower side of section
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managar
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has a
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big
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hall
And In
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has separate sitting area for
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small
employers. Moving towards, typical American
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, In the
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centre
of the
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, there is a
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big
main
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hall
and
also
set chairs for sitting in
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hall
and right side of
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has three
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cabins
, two are selection
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managar
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and one is department
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side of main
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4rooms
two are conference
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are storage and photography
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IELTS academic The graph below shows a typical American and japanese office.

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