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The diagram illustrate various steps in the processs of making yogurt.

The diagram illustrate various steps in the processs of making yogurt. 53OOV
The flow chart elucidates a process by how yogurt is made at home. This production involves exactly eight steps. In summary, the making of yogurt is beginning from heating of milk and ending at refrigerating the yogurt. In the initial stage, milk is boiled to 100 degree celsius on a stove before it is kept for cool down. At the same time, some old milk, which should be thin, is added to a little amount of cold milk. This mixture is whisked perfectly until this mixture is became so smooth and yogurt is blended completely. In the step, the purely mixed yogurt, then added to the slightly warmed milk. After which, the mixture puts into a towel in order to remain warm, subsequently, this has been rested for four hours to settle down. In the final stage, the yogurt is refrigerated in oder to be keep at as a fresh and for the later usage.
The flow chart elucidates a process by how yogurt
is made
at home. This production involves exactly eight steps.

In summary, the making of yogurt is beginning from heating of
milk
and ending at refrigerating the yogurt.

In the initial stage,
milk
is boiled
to 100 degree
celsius
on a stove
before
it is
kept
for cool down. At the same time,
some
old
milk
, which should be thin, is
added
to a
little
amount of
cold
milk
. This mixture
is whisked
perfectly
until this mixture is
became
so
smooth and yogurt
is blended
completely.

In the step, the
purely
mixed yogurt, then
added
to the
slightly
warmed
milk
. After which, the mixture puts into a towel in order to remain warm,
subsequently
, this has
been rested
for four hours to settle down. In the final stage, the yogurt
is refrigerated
in
oder
to be
keep
at as a fresh and for the later usage.
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