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The maps illustrate the transformations which have taken place in Kimsville town from 2002 to present.

The maps illustrate the transformations which have taken place in Kimsville town from 2002 to present. VbXA
The maps illustrate the transformations which have taken place in Kimsville town from 2002 to present. Overall, massive changes have gone taken in town to provide more amenities. As is observed from the maps, in 2002, there were trees in the north west and south West of the town, which were cut down and new apartment as well as, football stadium were added respectively. Town had a factory in the right side of the city centr, which was demolished to make the way for software company. Moving to the further details, the building was used as a old cinema in 2002, that building converted into pub. In addition, new railway station is introduced in the left side of city centre. However, there was a shopping centre, which remain stable.
The maps illustrate the transformations which have taken place in
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Kimsville
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town
from 2002 to present.

Overall
, massive
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changes
have gone taken in
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town
to provide more amenities.

As
is observed
from the maps, in 2002, there were trees in the
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north west
and south West of the
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town
, which were
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cut
down and new apartment
as well
as, football stadium were
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added
respectively
.
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Town
had a factory
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in the right side
of the city
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centr
, which
was demolished
to
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make
the way for software
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company
.

Moving to the
further
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details
, the building was
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used
as
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a
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old
cinema in 2002, that building converted into pub.
In addition
, new railway station
is introduced
in the
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left
side of city
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centre
.
However
, there was a shopping
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centre
, which remain stable.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the transformations which have taken place in Kimsville town from 2002 to present.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
129 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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