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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. lYAw
The charts give information about university applications of foreign and domestic students in Australia over a decade. In addition, both graphs further seperate data into two types, namely, total and commencing scholars. Overall, it can be clearly seen that while a number of total enrollments rose over time for both local and overseas students, a figure of commencing in domestic type was steadied. Moreover, there was by far a huge quantity of Australian learners compared to other nationalities. In 2001, the numbers of overall and commencing foreign students stood estimately at 20, 000 and 10, 000, respectively. Ten years later, there was a huge inflated in a total enrolments, which was almost 60, 000. Meanwhile, the commencing rate hike moderately to 40, 000. On the other hand, the figures of total and commencing local students were 400, 000 and 200, 000, sequentially in 2001. Consquently, the overall enrollment rate jump relatively to 600, 000, whereas the rate of commencing leveled off for a decade.
The charts give information about university applications of foreign and domestic
students
in Australia over a decade.
In addition
, both graphs
further
seperate
data into two types,
namely
,
total
and
commencing
scholars.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
that while a number of
total
enrollments rose over time for both local and overseas
students
, a figure of
commencing
in domestic type
was steadied
.
Moreover
, there was by far a huge quantity of Australian learners compared to other nationalities.

In 2001, the numbers of
overall
and
commencing
foreign
students
stood
estimately
at 20, 000 and 10, 000,
respectively
. Ten years later, there was a huge inflated in a
total
enrolments
, which was almost 60, 000. Meanwhile, the
commencing
rate hike
moderately
to 40, 000.

On the other hand
, the figures of
total
and
commencing
local
students
were 400, 000 and 200, 000,
sequentially
in 2001.
Consquently
, the
overall
enrollment rate jump
relatively
to 600, 000, whereas the rate of
commencing
leveled off for a decade.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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