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The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011. kx8jd
The graph here illustrates Food and Oil prices of the world over a period of 11 years from 2000-2011. Further more the Food price index is recorded in points and Average oil price is recorded as per barrel cost. Overall, the lowest points for Food was estimated to be around 90 points in the year 2000 where as the highest was recorded at almost 240 points. Similarly, the least price for Oil was recorded to be around $30 in 2000 while the highest price reached almost $140 by 2011. Furthermore, the Correlation between both estimates was recorded to be 93. 6%. Firstly, both the estimates followed a steady trend finally starting to move upwards between 2003-2004. Although, both prices showed similar trends, they showed slight divergence from 2005 until finally meeting again in 2007. Finally, the Food prices first peaked between 2008-2009 at around 220 points and around the same time Average oil prices peaked for the first time at $130 as well. Both the estimates sharply fell in between 2009-2010 reaching the lowest peaks of 140 points for Food price and $40 for Oil prices.
The graph here illustrates
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prices
of the world over a period of 11 years from 2000-2011.
Further
more the
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Food
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index is
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in
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points
and Average
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oil
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price
is
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recorded
as per barrel cost.

Overall
, the lowest
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points
for
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Food
was estimated
to be
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around
90
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points
in the year 2000
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the highest was
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recorded
at almost 240
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points
.
Similarly
, the least
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price
for
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was
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recorded
to be
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around
$30 in 2000 while the highest
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price
reached almost $140 by 2011.
Furthermore
, the Correlation between both estimates was
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recorded
to be 93. 6%.

Firstly
, both the estimates followed a steady trend
finally
starting to
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move
upwards between 2003-2004. Although, both
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prices
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showed
similar trends, they
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slight divergence from 2005 until
finally
meeting again in 2007.

Finally
, the
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Food
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first
peaked between 2008-2009 at
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around
220
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points
and
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around
the same time Average
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oil
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prices
peaked for the
first
time at $130
as well
. Both the estimates
sharply
fell in between 2009-2010 reaching the lowest peaks of 140
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for
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Food
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and $40 for
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Oil
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prices
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.

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4 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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