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THE GRAPH SHOW THE STOCK PIRCES OF FOUR TECHNOLOGY COMPANIES BETWEEN 2011 AND 2016.

THE GRAPH SHOW THE STOCK PIRCES OF FOUR TECHNOLOGY COMPANIES BETWEEN 2011 AND 2016. E7WoR

THE PROVIDED BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE RATE OF STOCK LISTED BY FOUR TECHNICAL ADVANCED FIRMS (FACEBOOK, APPLE, GOOGLE AND YAHOO) IN PERIOD OF 6 YEARS FROM 2011 TO 2016. OVERALL, IT IS VIVID THAT THE PRICE OF FACEBOOKS SHARE IS THE HIGHEST EXCEPT SECOND YEAR MEANWHILE, THE AMOUNT OF APPLE SHARES IS HIGHER THAN OTHER IN SAME PERIOD. GOOGLE SHARE REMAINS THE CONSTANT WHILE, YAHOO STOCK PRICES DECREASES STEADILY. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE AMOUNT FOR FACEBOOK SHARES IS THE HIGHEST IN EVERY SPAN EXCEPT 2012. IT BEGIN WITH, $7, 000 AND ROSES DRASTICALLY UNTILL 2016 AT $20, 000. IN CONTRAST, THE AMOUNT CHARGED FOR YAHOO IS DECLINED DURING THIS PERIOD. IN 2011, IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR $7500 AND FALLS TO $2500 IN 6 YEARS. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN BEGINNING SPAN THE PRICE FOR APPLE SHARES IN STOCK MARKET MERELY BELOW $5000, IT SKYROCKETED TO OVER $30, 000 IN 2012 THEN, IT DRAMATICALLY DROPS TO $6000 IN THIRD PERIOD. AFTER THAT, IT ROSES AGAIN IN 2014 AT $12, 000 AND IT SLIPS BY $6000 IN LAST SPAN. WHILE, THE GOOGLE SHARES PRICE REMAINED CONSTANT IN GIVEN YEARS AT APPROXIMATELY $1000.

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