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Comparison between present map of mall and proposed map.

Comparison between present map of mall and proposed map. LLy8p

The two maps illustrates the present shopping mall and expansion plan of the same mall in Southside near future. Overall the plan is to expand the mall and it's car parking for more stores and parking facilities at the expense of eateries, play area, cinemas and outside land on the east side. At present, Southside mall has Cafe, Play area, Noodle shop, Cinemas on the north side while Supermarket, Entrance and toilet on the south side with department store connected to toilet on the east side. Outside the mall for parking cars there is space present just on the left side of fitness center. On the east side land outside mall is occupied by golf course and Park.

The two maps illustrates the present shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 and expansion plan of the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 in Southside near future.

Overall
 the plan is to expand the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 and it's car parking for more stores and parking facilities at the expense of eateries, play area, cinemas and outside land on the east side.

At present, Southside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 has 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
, Play area, Noodle shop, Cinemas on the north side while Supermarket, Entrance and toilet on the south side with department store connected to toilet on the east side. Outside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 for parking cars there is space present This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of fitness center. On the east side land outside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
is occupied
 by golf course and Park. 