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The graph below shows average carbon dioxida (CO2) emmissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The graph below shows average carbon dioxida (CO2) emmissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The line graph compares the radiation of carbon dioxide (CO2) from 1967 to 2007 in four European Countries. Overall, there fluctuation of the metric tonnes from these nations. there was a escalated sharply in the emission in Sweden and Portugal. Sweden' s radiate the CO2 stood at 10. 05 in 1977, higher than the other states. However, the issuance dropped pointedly over the next 10 years to arrived at 7 and in 1987. Following that, carbon dioxide emission falling significantly to 5. 25 and cross the similar point with Portugal in 2007. Portugal experienced an increase in previous years likes in 1987 which obtained of 3 while gradually advanced to 5. In contrast, United Kingdom saw the remained upon at 11 as long as ten years between 1967 to 1977 and next to downward denotatively over the next 30 years to finish at 8. 5 in 2007. carbon dioxide radiation from Italy shows rise up by degrees from 1977 to 1997 and embedded to 7. 8 as far as 2007.

The line graph compares the radiation of carbon dioxide (CO2) from 1967 to 2007 in four European Countries. Overall
, there fluctuation of the metric tonnes from these nations.

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 rise up by degrees from 1977 to 1997 and embedded to 7. 8 as far as 2007. 

6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows average carbon dioxida (CO2) emmissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

170 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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