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The graph below shows acid rain emisson in UK from 1990 to 2007

The graph below shows acid rain emisson in UK from 1990 to 2007 Rw2Ok
The line graph indicates acid rain emission which measured by million tonnes in the UK with four sectors throughout 17 years in the period from 1990 to 2007. In general, the domestic, transport and communication industry remained stable and two other industries were in significant decline. The highest point was electricity, gas and water supply in 1990 but after 17 years, the highest figure belonged to other industries. In the first years, the data of these industries were apart from each other. The group of domestic and transport and communication was similar with more 0. 5 million tonnes while Electricity and other industries were nearly in order of 7 times and 4 times with nearly 3. 5 million tonnes and more 2 million tonnes compared with the rest of group. However, it is easy to see that the figures for electricity, gas and water supply were drop-down without breaking in the next years. After 17 years, the data had many fluctuations. In 2007, the lowest of the figures was still a domestic industry with lower 0. 25 million tonnes and followed by electricity, gas and water supply and transport and communication industry. The lead of all was other industries. Total acid rain emission was a decrease nearly tribble with 2. 5 million tonnes.
The line graph indicates acid rain emission which measured by
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million
tonnes in the UK with four sectors throughout 17 years in the period from 1990 to 2007.

In general
, the domestic, transport and communication
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industry
remained stable and two
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other
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industries
were in significant decline. The highest point was
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electricity
, gas and water supply in 1990
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but
after 17 years, the highest figure belonged to
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other
industries.

In the
first
years, the data of these
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industries
were apart from each
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other
. The group of domestic and transport and communication was similar with more 0. 5
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million
tonnes while
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Electricity
and
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other
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industries
were
nearly
in order of 7 times and 4 times with
nearly
3. 5
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million
tonnes and more 2
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million
tonnes compared with the rest of group.
However
, it is easy to
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see
that the figures for
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electricity
, gas and water supply were drop-down without breaking in the
next
years.

After 17 years, the data had
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many
fluctuations. In 2007, the lowest of the figures was
still
a domestic
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industry
with lower 0. 25
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million
tonnes and followed by
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electricity
, gas and water supply and transport and communication
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industry
. The lead of all was
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other
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industries
. Total acid rain emission was a decrease
nearly
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with 2. 5
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million
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IELTS academic The graph below shows acid rain emisson in UK from 1990 to 2007

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