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The bar chart given demonstrates how much data for producing coffee of four countries in the world within three years, starting from 2011.

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The bar chart given demonstrates how much data for producing coffee of four countries in the world within three years, starting from 2011. Overall, while a fluctuant trend was seen in the quantity of producing coffee in Brazil and Vietnam, the volume of making coffee in Indonesia and Colombia increased slightly. In 2011, the data of producing in Brazil was about 44000 units. This figure rose to around 51000 units before declining to about 49000 by the end of the period. A similar fluctuation was recorded in the volume of making coffee in Vietnam, which decreased from about 24000 units to 22000 units before rising to about 28000 units in 2013. At the beginning of the period, the quantity of producing café in Indonesia was approximately 9000 units. This figure climbed to about 11000 units by the end of the period. A similar upward trend was observed in the volume of making coffee in Colombia, which rose to approximately 11000 units throughout the period examined.

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 in Indonesia and Colombia increased slightly
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 in 2013.

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, the quantity of producing café in Indonesia was approximately 9000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
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. This figure climbed to about 11000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
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. A similar upward trend was observed
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 in Colombia, which rose to approximately 11000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
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