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The graph below showa population figures for india and china from 2000 to 2050

The graph below showa population figures for india and china from 2000 to 2050 LGJVG
The line graph illustrate the total population of two countries between 2000 and 2050. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was a slight downward trend of the total population of India. While the figure of the China rose dramatically. Compared from the both countries the highest population growth country was India At the start of period in china the total population rate was 1. 2 billion. There was a dramatical increase in China from around 1. 2 billion in 2000 to. 1. 4billion in 2030. And then fall back slightly over the period of 20 years. Maximum humans in India grew significantly from 2000 to 2050. There was a same level of total grwoth between china and india at 1. 4 billion in 2030.
The line graph illustrate the
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of two countries between 2000 and 2050.

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growth country was India

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china
the
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rate was 1. 2
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. There was a
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in 2000 to. 1.
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4billion
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from 2000 to 2050. There was a same level of
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IELTS academic The graph below showa population figures for india and china from 2000 to 2050

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