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The graph below showa the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000

The graph below showa the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000 rKMxl
The given poly line graph depicts the dollar per person spent on research into renewable energy over the period of 25 years since 1975. Overall, it is clear that Switzerland and Denmark followed increasing trend whereas Spain and U. K fluctates in the given years. In 1975, the expenditure of all countries was negligible. In 1980 $2 per person was spent on reasearch. following this Switzerland witnessed increasing trend till 2000 and reached at its peak point. Denmark spent $1 per person on research into renewable sources of energy in 1980. and it remain stable till 1990. after that it rose and reached to almost $4 per person into research of sources of energy. The amount of money spent by Spain and U. K on research into renewable sources of energy was $1 per person in 1980. Both countries fluctates in all the given years and reached to $0 per person on reasearch into renewable sources of energy.
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IELTS academic The graph below showa the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000

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