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The pie chart gives a breakdown of the type of food eaten by two groups of students, whilst the table highlights some features of their health. At first glance, it is clear that Group A students’ diet consists of more vegetables and fruit but less fat content. This may explain why students of Group B suffer more health problems and have lower attendance rates. According to the pie charts, there are similarities and differences with regard to the two groups’ diets. In both groups, about a third of the food students eat consists of cereals. Similarly, they eat an equal proportion of fish (5%). However, the percentage of high-fat food eaten by Group B is considerably higher than in Group A and slightly smaller than the amount of fresh fruit. Looking at the table for more details, there are twice as many overweight people in Group B as in Group A, with the figures being 20% and 10% respectively. What is more, Group B has experienced a much higher rate of illness over the year, at 15% and 5% in turn. This has resulted in a 15% lower attendance rate.

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