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The map charts show the mining town in the past and after , redevelopment in the present day .

The map charts show the mining town in the past and after, redevelopment in the present day. 6lDDW
The ostensible map charts detail the information about the image of a mining town in the past and after, demodernizing in the present. To start with, it can be seen that in prior to, in the left side of the town staff's changing room was situated in between the office and a parking lot, however now museum has been constructed on the place of first two areas except, parking segment because thatvis remains unchanged. Although, in both periods the position of main entrance is still exists at its previous stage but its purpose has altered and it is now merely used by voyagers not by workers. Turning to the remaining variations, it can be witnessed that medical room and lorry park. bith services have been cleared to make way for cafe inside the footpath location also waste 1 and 2 were positioned in the right hand side of the building, On the contrary both have been replaced by a driving truck track and a picnic area. An additional facility of children's playground is situated outside the footpath in the bottom corner of right side. Lookingbfrom an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the myriad alterations has followed by a given area and all are mandatory for its, redevelopment.
The ostensible map charts detail the information about the image of a mining town in the past and after,
demodernizing
in the present.

To
start
with, it can be
seen
that in prior to, in the
left
side of the town staff's changing room
was situated
in between the office and a parking lot,
however
now
museum has
been constructed
on the place of
first
two areas except, parking segment
because
thatvis
remains unchanged. Although, in both periods the position of main entrance is
still
exists at its previous stage
but
its purpose has altered and it is
now
merely
used
by voyagers not by workers.

Turning to the remaining variations, it can
be witnessed
that medical room and lorry park.
bith
services have
been cleared
to
make
way for
cafe
inside the footpath location
also
waste 1 and 2
were positioned
in the
right hand
side of the building,
On the contrary
both have
been replaced
by a driving truck
track
and a picnic area. An additional facility of children's playground
is situated
outside the footpath in the bottom corner of right side.

Lookingbfrom
an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the myriad alterations has followed by a
given
area and all are mandatory for its, redevelopment.
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IELTS academic The map charts show the mining town in the past and after, redevelopment in the present day.

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