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bar graph small, medium and large businesses using social medium

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The bar graph reveals the proportion of corporations using social networking sites for business purpose between 2021 and 2016. It can be seen from the graph, in the year 2016 small, medium, large businesses making use of social media increased considerably. In addition, the highest proportion of using social networks in large business peaked there is a slight drop in 2015. Where small and medium usage of the social web is the least compared to large businesses. The greatest number of large businesses making use of the social site amounted to 80%, and there was a considerable decline around 52% in the year 2015. Moreover, small and medium-sized business using of social networking site started at 28%. And 32% and every year there is a slight increase and a sudden drop in 2015
The bar graph reveals the proportion of corporations using
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social
networking sites for
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business
purpose between 2021 and 2016.

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from the graph, in the year 2016
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small
, medium,
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large
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businesses
making
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use
of
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social
media increased
considerably
.
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, the highest proportion of using
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social
networks in
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large
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business
peaked there is a slight drop in 2015. Where
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small
and medium usage of the
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social
web is the least compared to
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large
businesses.

The greatest number of
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large
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businesses
making
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use
of the
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social
site amounted to 80%, and there was a considerable decline around 52% in the year 2015.
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,
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small
and medium-sized
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business
using of
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social
networking site
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started
at 28%. And 32% and every year there is a slight increase and a sudden drop in 2015
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IELTS academic bar graph small, medium and large businesses using social medium

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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