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The graph below show the popularity of different fast food in UK.

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The line graph illustrates the amount of fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990. As is presented in the given graph, the most popular food was pizza, 300g was consumed each week. By 1990, it had fallen just over 200g. One the other hand, the amount of hamburger eaten shot up from 20g more than almost 270g in 1990. In intiaily phase, the consumption of fish and chips were at around 80g. However, it had increased and reached around 300g. In conclusion, there was steady rise in demand of fish and chips and hamburger while the trend was opposite for pizza.
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phase, the consumption of fish and chips were at around 80g.
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, it had increased and reached around 300g.
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, there was steady rise in demand of fish and chips and hamburger while the trend was opposite for pizza.
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