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The table and chart give information about different forms of travelling to work in Houston, Texas by percentage. The table compare several ways that people can use for go to work considering the average age of travelers. Most use form of transport is single-seat with percent of 48 which the average age of these people are 43 and the least is cycle/walk that dedicated to the younger group with an average age of 39. On the other hand, is the most important issue is compared by a bar chart with the subject of CO2 emissions from variety forms of staff commuting. The case that had the greatest impact on air pollution is car driver only. Plus, car-4 people are the next while cycle or walk doesn’t have any emissions. Overview, in both comparisons single-seat not solely is the most used but also has the most pollution, whereas cycle/walk is the least used with the least emission.

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IELTS academic compare table and barchart

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

156 words

7.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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