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The table and chart give information about different forms of travelling to work in Houston, Texas by percentage. The table compare several ways that people can use for go to work considering the average age of travelers. Most use form of transport is single-seat with percent of 48 which the average age of these people are 43 and the least is cycle/walk that dedicated to the younger group with an average age of 39. On the other hand, is the most important issue is compared by a bar chart with the subject of CO2 emissions from variety forms of staff commuting. The case that had the greatest impact on air pollution is car driver only. Plus, car-4 people are the next while cycle or walk doesn’t have any emissions. Overview, in both comparisons single-seat not solely is the most used but also has the most pollution, whereas cycle/walk is the least used with the least emission.
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forms of travelling to work in Houston, Texas by percentage.

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for go to work considering the average age of travelers. Most
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form of transport is single-seat with percent of 48 which the average age of these
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are 43 and the least is cycle/walk that dedicated to the younger group with an average age of 39.

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with the least emission.
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