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The graph below show the internet users as percentage of population in USA, Canada and Mexico.

The graph below show the internet users as percentage of population in USA, Canada and Mexico. VBrd7

The given line chart illustrates the proportion of internet users in the three countries that is USA, Canada and Mexico. Overall, It is apparent from the graph that Canada experienced a upward trend whereas Mexico showed downward trend. In detail, It is clear from the graph that the percentage of data users of Canada and USA are slight differ from each other. In the begging USA data users was maximum than Canada it was 20%. After that, they intersected each other in the year between 2001 and 2003. In the year 2005 there was a same number of internet users that was 70%. then in the 2007. The users of America grew minimally(80%) in the 2009 while, Network users of Canada rose significantly to 100% in 2009. On the contrary, Mexico was lowest number of internet users as it was 8% in the starting after that, It increased gradually to 10% in the 2001. It climbed nominally in the last 8 years and it reached to 40% in the 2009 which was minimum numbers of network users.

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 line chart illustrates the proportion of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
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clear
 from the graph that the percentage of data You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 of Canada and USA are slight differ from each other. In the begging USA data You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
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maximum
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users
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then
 in the 2007. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
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 of America grew minimally
(80%) in the 2009 while, Network You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 of Canada rose significantly
 to 100% in 2009. On the contrary
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lowest
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users
 as it was 8% in the starting after that, It increased gradually
 to 10% in the 2001. It climbed nominally
 in the last 8 years and it reached to 40% in the 2009 which was minimum numbers of network You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
. 