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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Wy5ra
The diagram shows information of the real estate constructor who is planning to build a new shopping mall in Brandfield, which is requested at S1 and S2 sites. The first location is S1, which has been located on the north side of the city center and between the river, haighway and the railway. Looking at the other side, the residential area represents this site of the northeast so people can easily travel there. Rather than park and golf ground are nearby the shopping mall. The secondary option is the S2 site, which is situated on the southwest side and among the railway and road. There is an industrial area only nearby, while a little far away from the city center, people getting problematic for emergency shopping in the mall. But on the other side, it is a non-traffic zone, so it can use in long-distance traveling places. Overall it can be seen that there are both sites are used for developing the Brandfield.
The diagram
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shows
information of the real estate constructor who is planning to build a new shopping mall in
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Brandfield
, which
is requested
at S1 and S2 sites.

The
first
location is S1, which has
been located
on the north side of the city center and between the river,
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haighway
and the railway. Looking at the other side, the residential area represents this site of the northeast
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so
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people
can
easily
travel there.
Rather
than park and golf ground are nearby the shopping mall.

The secondary option is the S2 site, which
is situated
on the southwest side and among the railway and road. There is an industrial area
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only
nearby, while a
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little
far away from the city center,
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people
getting problematic for emergency shopping in the mall.
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But
on the other side, it is a non-traffic zone,
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so
it can
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use
in long-distance traveling places.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that there are both sites are
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used
for developing the
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Brandfield
.
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IELTS academic Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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